Episode One

https://docs.google.com/fileview?id=0B1fThcIbOyz2ZjU2MTNiZWMtOWI0NC00Yzc2LTk4OWMtMGZiYThiZGIzY2M5&hl=en&authkey=CN-6n-IJ

This is a pdf I'm hosting of the first episode. I've tentatively named it 'Brown-coat's Lament'. Can't think of anything else I can say about it at the moment except I hope you all enjoy.

Ryan J.

That's how it's done, ladies and gentlemen. Great work, Ryan.

https://docs.google.com/fileview?id=0B1fThcIbOyz2MWE2NTAxNmQtMjg5Zi00MjQ2LWEyNjctMDYwZTE0YjAxMTll&hl=en&authkey=CNuXiucE

This is a slightly tweaked version of the script.

Ryan J.

I'm going to print it out and make notes, then make sense of them and get them back to you. It'll be pretty minor stuff.

For everyone else, I'm sure you'll notice that Ryan changed a lot of things from what I had originally intended. He talked to me a lot about it, and we decided on what was critical for the episode, then let him change the rest. I wholeheartedly recommend that the rest of you do the same analytical thinking. I won't complain at all.